While I have been writing other articles, and I normally prefer to wait a month or so between poetry posts, for some reason an inner-voice has been pestering me to get this one out. Don’t ask me why, but here it is.
Written in 2006, this poem… well, it speaks for itself.
Anymore
You brew your morning coffee
while I scan the TV space,
my commentary is just enough -
contempt across your face,
the dream you had of where we’d be
got lost in daily grind,
you feel the pressure of the future…
the things that tie and bind.
These last few years are wearing you -
I can see it in your eyes,
my little quirks you once found cute -
you cannot exorcise,
the day-to-day of living with me has
become a draining chore,
I have no doubt you love me…
but I don’t think you like me
anymore.
Your impatience is so prevalent
with every breath and sigh,
I feel it when you cut me off -
you know you can’t deny,
you work so hard to hide the truth
but it’s time to call your bluff
for I know you know that even love...
sometimes ain’t enough.
I feel the struggle of mind and heart -
you do not want to leave,
but my habits drive you to the edge -
feeling so naïve,
I sense you’re getting tired and don’t know
what you’re staying for,
I have no doubt you love me…
but I don’t think you like me
anymore.
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It's funny, but when you rhyme you cut like a knife. I've been married 50 years and this is exactly what happens. I don't think we're meant to find salvation in another human. God set it up this way on purpose.
The pain of the realization that you have come to inhabit two completely separate worlds while sharing the same space is an excruciating one to navigate, and so relatable. I love how the meter contrasts with the raw vulnerability of the overall piece. Beautifully done. 🔥