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Deb Nance's avatar

It's funny, but when you rhyme you cut like a knife. I've been married 50 years and this is exactly what happens. I don't think we're meant to find salvation in another human. God set it up this way on purpose.

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The Starfire Codes's avatar

The pain of the realization that you have come to inhabit two completely separate worlds while sharing the same space is an excruciating one to navigate, and so relatable. I love how the meter contrasts with the raw vulnerability of the overall piece. Beautifully done. 🔥

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