It starts simply, then weaves together intricately yet beautifully, and ever so softly... it reminded me of some of the poetry of Emmerson and Howard, I really liked this. It was beautiful, you have an amazing talent Mr. Bryson.
This was great. I felt myself flowing down the river of life, letting the waters wash all my cares away. It's "flow" (slight pun intended) kind of reminded me of Poe. Really good.
Very heartening, encouraging. As though the strength in 'me' has its own life alongside me, rising up to take hold of my life, so we can rejoin the living. Love it!
Fantastic, man. Keep them coming. I feel like we need more poetry on this God-forsaken platform. I'll keep publishing mine if you keep publishing yours
Well Stone. Well done. Confining the scope of the poem to a specific reveals a universal truth. I'm so happy you are a current, living breathing writer. Yay for uplifting words and beauty.
Stumbled on this randomly from notes. Beautiful poem, and I love the meter, flow, imagery. Smooth as glass. Thank you!
Thank you, RT - appreciate the kind words.
It starts simply, then weaves together intricately yet beautifully, and ever so softly... it reminded me of some of the poetry of Emmerson and Howard, I really liked this. It was beautiful, you have an amazing talent Mr. Bryson.
This was great. I felt myself flowing down the river of life, letting the waters wash all my cares away. It's "flow" (slight pun intended) kind of reminded me of Poe. Really good.
"let the strength I've recovered
rise up, and reclaim my life."
Very heartening, encouraging. As though the strength in 'me' has its own life alongside me, rising up to take hold of my life, so we can rejoin the living. Love it!
Thank you! Your poem was perfect reading this evening. Very lovely 😊
Gorgeous poem!
Thank you so much, Jenna ☺️
Fantastic, man. Keep them coming. I feel like we need more poetry on this God-forsaken platform. I'll keep publishing mine if you keep publishing yours
You know what - you may well be right, about the need for more poetry here; sounds like a great plan!
Thanks so much for the gracious comment - let's gear up for 2024!
Well Stone. Well done. Confining the scope of the poem to a specific reveals a universal truth. I'm so happy you are a current, living breathing writer. Yay for uplifting words and beauty.
Beautiful ❤️
Beautiful!