Wow, Stone, this was such a great story (dream). Very visual as someone else already commented. I have a friend who can relate to your story, if I didn't know better, I would have thought you knew his pain and expressed the demons he's wrote about so many times to me. Thank you for taking us along on this ride into another realm of emotions! You are very appreciated!
Wow I haven't read a story that I could visualize in my mind like that for some time!
I really appreciate that, my friend. As fiction is the genre I write less frequently than any other , a comment like this is very encouraging :-)
That was a story that absorbed my full attention. Thanks for sharing
Thank YOU, Steve, for the gracious words; gratified you enjoyed it 🙂
Short, sweet, and to the point…I enjoyed it 😊
Thanks, EK - happy you did :-)
So descriptive and engaging. Well done!
Very much appreciate that, brother...
What a sad story.
Yeah, Kerry... that was not the intent when I first started writing it, but... well, the story goes where it takes me :-[ Appreciate ya!
Oooooooohhhhhh....the stuff of nightmares. I'll be sleeping with one eye open tonight.
Thanks, Michael! I don't consider myself a 'horror' writer, per se, but this one... well, it kind of fits ;-)
Great ending!
Thank you so much, Gwyneth - happy for the reaction! :-)
Wow, Stone, this was such a great story (dream). Very visual as someone else already commented. I have a friend who can relate to your story, if I didn't know better, I would have thought you knew his pain and expressed the demons he's wrote about so many times to me. Thank you for taking us along on this ride into another realm of emotions! You are very appreciated!
Excellence!