Holy fuck. If I have the energy tonight I might write a reaction/response post to this because —- I have so fkng much to say. This was beyond well done..and a message I think everyone can benefit from understanding, if they understand a few other things already. 😭
Holy smokes, dude. I did not see the twist coming, and I pride myself on predicting them.
Thanks, brother - that was one of the goals ;-)
Keep at it.
I was laughing to myself that I'm basically both her parents in one (except we get along with us🤪🤪😝😝) and then.....
Bamn outta nowhere the freakin plane crashed😳😳😞😞
To be honest.? When it comes to the parental thing... .. you're not the only one ;-)
See I kinda already know Im in good company, with this crowd😁😁😝😝
Haha I thought the same thing! 😆
Ewwwww….. chilling at the end Stone. 🥶
I didn’t see the surprise coming at the end! Sweet! 👍♥️
Glad it caught you off guard, Charlotte, and that it gave you a little chill :-) Happy you enjoyed it, too!
Absolutely! A nice twist and surprise I loved it! Stone, great! 👏 🤗♥️
WOW tense and then that twist at the end… you did it again, Stone, making me hold my breath (I think I’m going for a second coffee). 💙💫
So very kind, Joyce - grateful this was your reaction :-) Thank you!
Cool twist at the end... I liked this.
Thanks again, Sane - appreciate it!
This was a gut-punch!
I'm gratified it 'hit' you, means I am doing something right.
I totally agree.
That twist made me gasp…
Thank you, my friend... that was the goal (no pun intended with the title).
Whoah. I was by chance out sick that day.
The allure of the City is real.
Indeed it is...
Reminds me of when I loved to NYC on September 7, 2001. What a week that was.
Sounds like a good memory... before a very bad one we all shared.
Ahhh the ending tho.
I was hoping that might affect one or two people... ;-)
Thank you for sharing such lovely writing.
Thank you so much, Jennifer - I very much appreciate this <3
The IC (eye see) that lives inside Amera's inner secret...
;-)
That has a nice hook to it. Hopefully she ran late to work the next day.
You never can tell... ;-)
Holy fuck. If I have the energy tonight I might write a reaction/response post to this because —- I have so fkng much to say. This was beyond well done..and a message I think everyone can benefit from understanding, if they understand a few other things already. 😭
I thought you might... catch that ;-)
I was totally hooked! Great unexpected ending and powerful short story 🔥👏🏽
I got the towers instantly and had to scroll down to find the date.
September 10, 2001. Holy Snikes.
It's too bad her first day had to be the day from hell.