I use the ellipsis a lot too. It's just a natural reflection of me talking, and pausing for a second... lol, I felt right at home. love the poem, the world is wild now, and always, seeing you wrote this first in 2014. The problems change the chaos stays the same. Maybe that is what sleep is really for, to end each day, and dream a new creation into reality. To wake up into a new world.
'Wake up into a new world'... oh Kara, I like that notion! Beats the hell out of the "Okay, so where IS that asteroid?' mindset LOL Thanks for the gracious words and wonderful comment.
Everything is a never ending story... imagined into existence. I would like to look into the concept of LIFE is a Reflection of your Beliefs, of where you are putting your attention. I want to uncover the truth or lie in that.
Thank you Stone, I tend to be in the mindset of where and when is that asteroid going to hit, thanks for giving me the bright idea to investigate this further. I'd like to wake up each morning to a new life... a new perspective, wonder where it would take me.
Oh, and sidebar? You ever take a notion to convert one of my poems into a song, you do not have to ask permission; I've heard your musical stylings, so just assume said-permission is granted in advance ;-)
I use the ellipsis a lot too. It's just a natural reflection of me talking, and pausing for a second... lol, I felt right at home. love the poem, the world is wild now, and always, seeing you wrote this first in 2014. The problems change the chaos stays the same. Maybe that is what sleep is really for, to end each day, and dream a new creation into reality. To wake up into a new world.
'Wake up into a new world'... oh Kara, I like that notion! Beats the hell out of the "Okay, so where IS that asteroid?' mindset LOL Thanks for the gracious words and wonderful comment.
Oh, and...? Long live the ellipsis! ;-)
Everything is a never ending story... imagined into existence. I would like to look into the concept of LIFE is a Reflection of your Beliefs, of where you are putting your attention. I want to uncover the truth or lie in that.
Thank you Stone, I tend to be in the mindset of where and when is that asteroid going to hit, thanks for giving me the bright idea to investigate this further. I'd like to wake up each morning to a new life... a new perspective, wonder where it would take me.
OOOhhhh....I love this, Stone!!
Again, great lyrical potential here!!
Very happy you do, Jacqueline! Thanks so much!
Oh, and sidebar? You ever take a notion to convert one of my poems into a song, you do not have to ask permission; I've heard your musical stylings, so just assume said-permission is granted in advance ;-)
WOW!!
What a gift you have given me, Stone!!
Thank you.....I will be taking you up on that. ;)
Oh, trust me - in this case, I would be the one receiving the gift :-)
That's so beautiful. Feelin' your message in my heart! xo
You never cease to amaze me with beautiful poems, news, musings and philosophical texts. Thank you, Stone for all your work 💙💫🌿
As always, you are far to gracious <3 Thank you so much, Joyce, for your continued support - I appreciate you :-)
Great stuff as usual, Stone! Keep apologizing for nothing... 😁
Thanks, Kristen - we'll keep rolling along 🙂
It’s a wonderful poem, Stone. Wow! I can’t wait to read more. And I use ellipses a lot too, as well as the dash.
Naturally, Samantha - you are an individual of sophistication and taste - as such, ellipses and dashes are a part of life 😁
Thanks for the gracious words ☺️
Beautiful poem. It brought to mind Sarah Mclachlan's song "Hold On".
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=X341f4aefro&pp=ygUXU2FyYWggbWNsYWNobGFuIGhvbGQgb24%3D
Cannot go wrong with Sarah... <3
Thank you for the kind words, Gwyneth - gratified you enjoyed the work.
Love it! Bringing the madness on down to the Mother Earth, people getting re-rooted and don't even know it!
I like the way you interpreted that, Angela :-) Appreciate the gracious words - thank you!
It is what it is...it's terror to most but it doesn't have to be...it just is...what it is...
Nicely done...
Love this comment, Kary - thanks so much for sharing it, and happy you enjoyed the work :-)
This would make a great song Stone!
🎶 Thank you for sharing, I love it! 💖
Thanks so much, Amy! And I have to admit, hearing that from a talent like Jacqueline... feels pretty good ;-)
Happy you liked it!
Love Song https://g.co/kgs/i2z1V7D ( for the apocalypse)
That's kind of beautiful <3 Thanks for sharing it, Jade...